Why have you chosen to work with your creative partner? What are your aims?
What are your specific areas of creative interest in this brief?
What specific design skills do you have to offer in relation to your chosen brief? How do you intend to use them?
What specific non-design skills do you have to offer in relation to your chosen brief? How do you intend to use them?
What will your specific responsibilities be in the collaboration in relation to your brief?
What were your joint responsibilities be?
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Hello Becca,
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RECORDING/DOCUMENTATION
+ Photographic documentation is really thorough and strong. Nice shots in the laser cutting post in particular
+ Recent session on what/why is clearly typed up in a readable manner
- You need to complete final 5x boards to show your side of the collab. Also where are your final product shots?
- Some of your photography needs to improve in terms of the quality, just spend a few minutes settings up a nice product shot scene and you'll be sorted.
LEVEL OF ANALYSIS
+ Documentation of existing products in relation to your own design practice is very thorough of your design context blog (needs written analysis however).
- As mentioned, many posts don't have analysis on them; this includes design practice blog im afraid!
- Module evaluation not complete.
- Your contextual research in our opinion is not diverse enough. Don't be afraid to look outwards more.
ORGANISATION OF MATERIAL
+ Well organised in terms of your progression; initial ideas up until final(ish) product.
- Perhaps document major turning points more clearly.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS
You've written things that you would like to do yourself as a designer but your context blog doesn't appear to reflect upon this. It seems as if you are researching stuff because you HAVE to and not because you WANT/LIKE to.
Overall, just bring in influences that you like... no matter how loosely they may tie in. Everything will have relevant elements.
This aside, all good: just keep your blogging skils more consistent and up to date!
Hine, Hitchen and Apprentice. x