The show and tell crit today went really well, was a nice different way to crit peoples work and i got some really constructive feedback.
Was also nice to see everyones works out and presented on the tables, i'm realising how must people are doing and to such a high standard.
Feedback:
- You need to sort out your imagery for the balloon brief, the layout is nice but the image is still pixelated.
- sort out the kerning on your balloon brief title, its a bit spacious.
- Defiantly keep the box white, it keeps more in with the identity of the brief. Would defiantly work with the glow in the dar design on this.
- Would be nice to see more of the products, even if they are mocked up.
- Film Festival brief looking really good but the dvd/ticket doesn't really work.
- Think it would be better if u had a separate ticket to a dvd as people wont carry the dvd around the festival with them.
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